A Wish

by Allison K. Roopcharan
(Flushing NY)

I wished upon a star,
That I could be a horse,
To roam the fields and pastures,
And would never get lost.
For I would be ridden,
By my master or his son.
To practice and get better,
For they will call me number one.

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Amazing
by: Sara

I loved it, it was so sweet :)

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Lovely.
by: Andrea

Very nice. It makes me think about what I wanted to be when I was growing up.

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Thank you
by: Allison

Thank you for your comments you made my day, was nine when I wrote this...

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great job
by: McCollonough Ceili

I really like your poem. It brought a smile to my face.

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