Forever and Ever

by Genevieve Lemkus
(New Zealand)

Will you be mine forever,
and ever
Because forever,
and ever,
is all that I pray
I need you so ever,
so I’ll ask you forever
Because forever is all I can say.

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Aug 29, 2012
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Good job!
by: Anonymous

It is very poetic but you could add more vocabulary into your poem to make the readers more engaged. Good job.

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