If you really want to know me

by Amanda Lauwers
(Redlands, California)

If you really want to know me
Look deep into the sea
For that is where I've hidden
And that is where I'll be
Behind the terror and darkness I lie still
Afraid of rejection I'd smile ill
Ill of people lying to me
Trying to find ways to look through me
But until they take the dive in
They'll never know what lies within

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Jun 17, 2016
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Authentic Talent
by: Anonymous

I feel that the ability to express a deep emotional state in words as you have done, so graphically, denotes an undeniably authentic gift. Talent is a gift which we acknowledge with long personal and unflagging service. Please be loyal to the gift you have been blessed with and it will enrich you further in many ways. My compliments.
Raff

Jul 23, 2013
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me
by: katie

that is a really good poem it made me think of my self alot well done !!

Mar 07, 2013
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Like
by: Silvija

I´m impressed!
Keep up the good work

Mar 07, 2013
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KNOW ME
by: G CAMPOS

What if we can't swim???

Mar 06, 2013
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Thank you
by: Dilila

I just loved it, thank you for posting.

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