Kill you with Kindness

by Cathie Tufnail
(Hampshire, UK)



I don't want to kill you with kindness
I'd rather use poison instead
Or a gun or a knife would be almost as nice
Just as long as you ended up dead!

No, I don't want to kill you with kindness,
But I might use an axe in your head,
Just as long as it's painful and lasting,
Just as long as it's fatal and red.

So beware when you next see me smiling,
Don't believe that you're safe in your bed
It's a trick of the light
You won't run, you can't fight
In the morning my love, you'll be dead!

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May 08, 2017
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A beautiful daydream..
by: Anonymously famous

I had to read it again and again! This is the kind of poem that infect's you with every manor of fantasy. Stumbling around daydreaming about what events it inspires instead of concentrating on my job at the post office.

Apr 05, 2017
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Kill You with Kindness
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I couldn't have put it better myself! Wizard man of words!

Mar 22, 2017
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Kill You with Kimdness
by: Anonymous

Yes, I can relate to your sublime poem. I WILL NEVER EVER FORGIVE. I will be the proverbial thorn in their sides. I will haunt them like a ghost until the end of time.

Feb 06, 2013
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Best poem ever
by: Anonymous

Omg! That really is the best poem I have ever read in my life!

May 23, 2012
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awesome
by: Anonymous

omg this is the best poem ever i love it ssooo much.

Feb 18, 2012
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wow
by: Anonymous

i really like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dec 15, 2011
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hahaha =)
by: Laughterz

haha i like this... yu did a good job =D

Dec 09, 2011
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Wow.
by: Sarah [;

What a story. I like it. [;
Great job, love {:

Dec 07, 2011
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nice
by: I'm fine

I find it really good

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