My Other Half

by Shanice A.Rodriguez
(Queens, NY)

Your hugs are sweet,
Your kisses are sweeter,
Your love makes me weak,
Your smile is a keeper,
Your touch is warming,
Your sweet words are comforting,
You're all I ever wanted,
Your whole personality,
I love it,
God sent me my angel,
You're the one,
I know it

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Stars
by: Monday

I'm writing back because I forgot to post stars. I give you 5 stars but I would give you 10 for this imperticular poem. It is very much heart felt. Thank You for sharing Shanice.

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Goosebumps
by: Monday

WOW Shanice this poem is amazing. I read your poem and wow again it hit my stomach. As I read I couldn't help but see the image of my better half. I felt like I was being read. It is an awesome. It had me feeling the beginning months with my what is now my hubby. Your poem hits home and it surely gave the goosebumps. I look forward to reading more of your poems.

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