Ode to Death in the Name of Love Lost

by I'm Fine
(Body's location: France/ Heart's location: San Francisco)

The day now has arrived
For me to leave your side
She is waiting for me
To come and finally see
The end of my life
I come to freely
Will take away this knife
And appease my body
That Death is full of pure beauty
When you accept her completely
No remorse for this life
That hurt more than a knife
I'm not coming to you
I will stop this nightmare
The end is what I'm looking forward to
I'll be dead and you won't even care
I'm accepting my deadly fate
I will be dead soon at this rate
I gave you all my life
You just gave me that knife
You stabbed into my heart
That used to be all yours
It was hopeless from the start
But this life felt as ours

The end is near
My vision's clear
This is the end
I will not stand

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May 04, 2012
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Thanks anonymous
by: I'm fine

Well thank you :) if you like it well maybe check out my other poems like
Bleeding every fifth
Your betrayal
Saying I'm fine with bleeding wrists
Classical deadly love
Sonnet to a cursed love

And if by any chance you can understand French well check the one called
Mes maux sont inconnus

Thanks again

Feb 18, 2012
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amazing
by: Anonymous

like it a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Feb 03, 2012
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by: taylor

i will email you

Feb 02, 2012
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by: I'm fine

Does he know how much what he did hurt you? And you should try to screw her up mentally, to ruin her reputation, make her look like a whore and he won't want her anymore ... Physical violence isnt the good solution... I've learned that from my experiences, I prefer punching walls than people... And also you should try to find another guy... I know it's hard but it's possible, I did it, even though it didn't turn out really well cause she s getting scared of the cuts on my arm, she says that I would hurt a lot more if we stayed together... Im starting to think that I'm cursed ...
Ps: if you wanna talk somewhere than on mywordwizard, you can still send me emails... jbrotabe2@gmail.com

Feb 01, 2012
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by: taylor

But it would make me feel better. today was his bday i gt a friend to tell him happy b day 4 me. and he starts texting me. i still cant trust him. and it still hurt and i still wana choke her

Jan 31, 2012
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by: I'm fine

Well if you hit her he'll get mad at you and I don't think that it's what you want...

Jan 30, 2012
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by: taylor

yea im sorry for ure loss to. and i watch him every day sittn with the girl i hate more than anyone. i want to punch her in her ugly face.

Jan 26, 2012
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by: I'm fine

(last post was from me also) and I really hope either you ll get reunited with the one you love one day either you ll find someone way better pretty soon...

Jan 26, 2012
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by: Anonymous

Ow ... :/ im sorry for you :( some people say that changes are for the better ... and i hope that you'll find someone better...

Jan 24, 2012
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by: Taylor

Well Honest i do know hw u feel now just found out my loves leaving (moving) and he wasent guna tell me we gt in huge fight and arent talking...were done

Jan 22, 2012
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by: I'm fine

Hey, is there anyone of you who understands French ?

Jan 13, 2012
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by: taylor

yea i get that

Jan 12, 2012
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Thanks
by: I'm fine

Well thank you for understanding in that case... Though I think that it could have been worse for me if I stayed in SF and that she dumped me for that guy while I was still there... Well again thank you for reviewing my poem, it s one of the rare things that can make me happy in this world...

Jan 11, 2012
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Jan 02, 2012
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thats happend
by: taylor

that has happend to me my love dumped me and started hanging with the trashyest skank ive ever had the disspleasure to meet so i do know how you feel.

Dec 28, 2011
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by: I'm fine

Well if one day that person dumps you for someone else like a vulgar piece oh s**t then you ll know how I feel...

Dec 26, 2011
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by: Taylor

yea i trust my love the most outa almost erybody

Dec 24, 2011
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by: i'm fine

Well yeah i know... The worst is when it s the person you trusted the most in the world ...

Dec 23, 2011
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jh
by: Taylor

Yea, People do break promises and im sorry i know that sucks

Dec 15, 2011
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thank you
by: i'm fine

Thank you for reviewing my poem, I like finding people who understands how i feel and well it's really hard to hold when you're on the other side of the globe and that that person breaks all her promises...

Dec 13, 2011
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I know how that is
by: Taylor

I know how that is i went 7 months in love with a dude I thought didnt love me he ignored me then we became friends again but when i asked him did he love me he always found a way to dodge the question...then I dated sm1 else and he confessed he did love me. we got back together but had to break up due to some stressors but we are still in love.. I hope it lasts cuz I love him alot and i often wonder hw I made it through without him but im glad I did.
So keep holding on

Dec 10, 2011
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thank you
by: I'm fine

Thank you very much :) and well to get reunited one day, i'd need her to love me again...

Dec 09, 2011
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Nice :)
by: Taylor

I love this poem.
And im sorry the one you love lives so far away
I know I couldent Deal if my Beloved was so far away..
But hopefully you will be reunited one day :)))

Dec 08, 2011
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thanks :)
by: I'm fine

Thank you very much for reviewing and yeah the girl i love is in San Francisco and well i moved back to France last summer :(

Dec 08, 2011
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Amazing.
by: Sarah [;

This is amazing. I love it. I love the location that you did. I assume you love someone in San Francisco. I'm sorry you have to live so far away from the one you love, but I know how you feel. :P

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