Rain

by Rosie
(Myanmar)

Rain races onto the porch
hitting hard like
Rockets rushing
in a race to the glass.
Rattling rain,
rattling the window panes.
The droplets dance daintily
until
they cleverly connect
in
a pool of promise for a rainbow.

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Feb 12, 2012
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nice
by: Lucy

I really like your poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sep 04, 2011
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Well done!
by: @noriangirl

I could clearly see in me minds eye, the images you spoke of.

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