The Lonely Road

by Rachel And Lucy
(North Somerset)

Having to tread the path of
life
Always seeing death and destruction
Always hearing screaming and shouting

Everyone doesn't understand and accept
you for who you are
Looking in the mirror staring recklessly
At yourself thinking about who and
what you are

Nothing and no one will stand up to you
For as long as you live
No one will help you find your way
Oh will death not come soon enough

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May 24, 2012
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Like It, But Depressing
by: Caneel

It's a really good, really meaningful poem. I write poems but can't always find the right words to do so, and I'm amazed you've done just that. If you really are feeling that depressed, I reccomend finding a meditation app for you iPhone or iPod.
Would you pleeeeease keep an eye out for some of my poems here? I'm desperate for reviews, and some constructive criticism would be good, too, if you can think of anything.

May 08, 2012
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i luv it
by: Anonymous

Rachel and Lucy,you two really do make an amazing team.I wrote down all of your poems(the ones i found)most of your poems are very heart touching actually all.I look forward to see more poems from you two

Apr 11, 2012
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RACHEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
by: lucy

we make an amazing team ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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