Zehreli Raten

by Qamar Balti
(Karachi)

salam dear all:
I Have just stared to write my own poetry.
I hope you people will like it because its my pain
which i am sharing you in the form of poetry.
please try to identify correct if any mistake
you found.
TITLE:"ZEHRELI-RATEN"
"Na-jane kasi qayamat hay ye Zehreli-Raten
Har saans mushaqat hay ye Zehreli-Raten
Mare ru-baru aa kay phir xay bichar gae wo
Na jane kesi adawat hay ye Zehreli-Raten
Kashmakash qalab tha rooh bhi bechain thi
Kitni shidat-e-muhabbat hay ye Zehreli-Raten
Aye musawir-e-haqiqi,hussan-e-musawiri dekha day
Aalam-e-dardo furqat hay ye Zehreli-Raten
Hans pare Kai baar dard chupate chupate
Labon pa phr bhi midhat hay ye Zehreli-Raten
Aah nikli gir pare ansu aghyaar k gham may
Ab to lagta rehmat hay Zehreli-Raten"
REGARD:
Qamar
Abbas
Balti